应用文写作之“建议信”(第二篇)

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资料类型:高一级

适用年级:基本技能

难易程度:在线学习

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  • 使用指导:这是一篇拥有标准“建议”句型的建议信,认真学习可以掌握表达建议的句式与相应的语气。

  • 假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom来信说,近来他经常感到心烦易怒。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:LLM小快课

    1.表示安慰;LLM小快课

    2.提出建议。LLM小快课

    注意:LLM小快课

    1.词数10左右;LLM小快课

    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。LLM小快课

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    【参考答案】LLM小快课

    Dear Tom,LLM小快课

          I'm sorry to know that you tend to be upset and annoyed these days. In fact, it's a common phenomenon for teenagers especially before an exam, so you don't have to worry a lot. Here are some useful tips to help you control your temper .LLM小快课

          First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. What's more, you'd better keep optimistic about your future. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.LLM小快课

         Hopefully, you will find my advice helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.LLM小快课

                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours, LLM小快课

                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li HuaLLM小快课

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    【语言分析】LLM小快课

    1.词汇积累LLM小快课

    倾向于做:tend to do →have a tendency to doLLM小快课

    事实上:in fact →as a matter of factLLM小快课

    建议:tips →suggestionsLLM小快课

    此外:what's more →besidesLLM小快课

    2.句式拓展LLM小快课

    同义句转换LLM小快课

    原句:First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.LLM小快课

    拓展句:Firstly, my suggestion is that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.LLM小快课

    【点睛】LLM小快课

    【高分句型1】First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略关系代词的限制性定语从句,how引导的宾语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句,动名词作介宾。)LLM小快课

    【高分句型2】It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作主语,because引导原因状语从句,动词不定式作后置定语。)LLM小快课

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