应用文写作之“建议信”(第三篇)

2023-04-14 阅读

资料类型:高一级

适用年级:基本技能

难易程度:在线学习

扣除点数:5

  • 使用指导:“建议信”类应用文,一般的命题是来信者在某方面遇到一些问题,请求你给出建议以便帮助他解决问题或改善情况。

  • 假如你是李华,你的美国笔友David来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫,请你给他回信,内容包括:I45小快课

    1. 表示安慰;I45小快课

    2. 分析原因并给出建议。I45小快课

    注意:I45小快课

    1.词数100左右;I45小快课

    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。I45小快课

    Dear David,I45小快课

    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I45小快课

    I45小快课
    I45小快课
    I45小快课
    【参考答案】I45小快课
    Dear David,I45小快课

        So worried am I to know that you are confused about spoken Chinese learning. I am writing to provide you with constructive advice.I45小快课
        It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world while spoken Chinese is rather difficult for its pronunciation. Were I you, I would join a Chinese club which helps to overcome the barrier to language practicing and to promote my skills in making a conversation. It is also strongly recommended that you should watch a stand-up comedy which benefits language learning and can also relieve your stress from numerous pressure.I45小快课
           Chinese serves as a fabulous language which is of great benefit. I sincerely hope you can make great progress in spoken Chinese.I45小快课

                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours,I45小快课

                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li HuaI45小快课

    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 David 来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫,请你给他回信,内容包括:1. 表示安慰;2. 分析原因并给出建议。I45小快课

    【详解】I45小快课

    1.词汇积累I45小快课

    困惑的:confused→bemusedI45小快课

    建议:advice→suggestionI45小快课

    克服:overcome→conquerI45小快课

    有益的:beneficial=helpfulI45小快课

    2.句式拓展I45小快课

    简单句变复合句I45小快课

    原句:I am writing to provide you with constructive advice.I45小快课

    拓展句:I am writing to provide you with constructive advice, which will be useful.I45小快课

    【点睛】[高分句型1] So worried am I to know that you are confused about spoken Chinese learning. (运用了倒装句型及that引导的宾语从句)I45小快课

    [高分句型2] It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world while spoken Chinese is rather difficult for its pronunciation.(运用了that引导的主语从句,while引导时间状语从句)I45小快课

    [高分句型3] Were I you, I would join a Chinese club which helps to overcome the barrier to language practicing and to promote my skills in making a conversation.(运用了状语从句的省略句、倒装结构、虚拟语气及which引导的限制性定语从句)I45小快课

    另一个参考答案(需要付费查看)I45小快课

     I45小快课

    内容加载中..