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应用文写作之“建议信”(第一篇)

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资料类型高一级

适用年级基本技能

难易等级在线学习

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使用指导“建议信”具有相应的建议句式,建议句子的语气也相对比较委婉,相应的理由让人感到充分,容易让人信服。

高一级

假设你是李华,你的笔友Jane将来中国做一年的交换生,她写信向你寻求尽快适应中国中学校园的建议。请你用英语给她回一封电子邮件,提出至少两点建议。

注意:

1. 词数:80词左右;

2. 可适当增加细节。

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【答案】

Dear Jane,

       I'm delighted to know that you are coming to China and spending one year as an exchanging student. As for how to adapt yourself to Chinese campus life. I have some suggestions.

       Firstly, you are expected to work hard at Chinese, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about China, and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. I believe by doing this, you will be adapted to your new life soon.

       How I wish these suggestions could be very useful to you.

                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生以李华的身份,给笔友Jane在中国做交换生期间就如何适应中国校园生活提出相应的建议。

【语言分析】

1.词汇积累

高兴的:delighted→grateful

参加:take part in→participate in

种类:kind→variety

2. 句型拓展

同义句转换

简单句:They can help you to know more about China, and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness.

同义句:Not only can friends help you to know more about China, but also they can help you to forget your loneliness.

 

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I'm delighted to know that you are coming to China and spending one year as an exchanging student.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Firstly, you are expected to work hard at Chinese, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)