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应用文写作之“建议信”(第三篇)

2023-04-14 阅读

资料类型高一级

适用年级基本技能

难易等级在线学习

使用点数5

使用指导“建议信”类应用文,一般的命题是来信者在某方面遇到一些问题,请求你给出建议以便帮助他解决问题或改善情况。

高一级

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友David来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫,请你给他回信,内容包括:

1. 表示安慰;

2. 分析原因并给出建议。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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【参考答案】
Dear David,

    So worried am I to know that you are confused about spoken Chinese learning. I am writing to provide you with constructive advice.
    It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world while spoken Chinese is rather difficult for its pronunciation. Were I you, I would join a Chinese club which helps to overcome the barrier to language practicing and to promote my skills in making a conversation. It is also strongly recommended that you should watch a stand-up comedy which benefits language learning and can also relieve your stress from numerous pressure.
       Chinese serves as a fabulous language which is of great benefit. I sincerely hope you can make great progress in spoken Chinese.

                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是李华,你的美国笔友 David 来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫,请你给他回信,内容包括:1. 表示安慰;2. 分析原因并给出建议。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

困惑的:confused→bemused

建议:advice→suggestion

克服:overcome→conquer

有益的:beneficial=helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:I am writing to provide you with constructive advice.

拓展句:I am writing to provide you with constructive advice, which will be useful.

【点睛】[高分句型1] So worried am I to know that you are confused about spoken Chinese learning. (运用了倒装句型及that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world while spoken Chinese is rather difficult for its pronunciation.(运用了that引导的主语从句,while引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型3] Were I you, I would join a Chinese club which helps to overcome the barrier to language practicing and to promote my skills in making a conversation.(运用了状语从句的省略句、倒装结构、虚拟语气及which引导的限制性定语从句)

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