假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom来信说,近来他经常感到心烦易怒。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数10左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to know that you tend to be upset and annoyed these days. In fact, it's a common phenomenon for teenagers especially before an exam, so you don't have to worry a lot. Here are some useful tips to help you control your temper .
First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. What's more, you'd better keep optimistic about your future. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.
Hopefully, you will find my advice helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语言分析】
1.词汇积累
倾向于做:tend to do →have a tendency to do
事实上:in fact →as a matter of fact
建议:tips →suggestions
此外:what's more →besides
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
拓展句:Firstly, my suggestion is that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略关系代词的限制性定语从句,how引导的宾语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句,动名词作介宾。)
【高分句型2】It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作主语,because引导原因状语从句,动词不定式作后置定语。)