假定你是李华, 得知你的美国朋友Adam下月将到中国旅游, 请回复邮件表示欢迎并提出在中国旅游的相关建议,要点包括:
1. 推荐一个城市; 2. 景点和活动介绍; 3. 其他注意事项。
注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Adam,
Informed that you’re planning to travel around China next month,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Adam,
Informed that you’re planning to travel around China next month, I’m writing to extend my warm welcome and offer you some advice on visiting.
Firstly, I’d like to recommend that you pay a visit to Jingzhou in southern Hubei, which is also my hometown. Located in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River on the Jianghan Plain, it has a unique place in history and is known as the Cradle of Chu Culture as well as Land of Fish and Rice. Secondly, I advise you to fully experience what Jingzhou has to offer, from sightseeing at popular tourist sites, such as the Ancient City Wall and Jingzhou Museum, to tasting traditional cuisines and going shopping at local markets. In addition, it would be wise if you travel by train, as the China Railway High-speed is convenient and comfortable. Do remember to book tickets in advance, though.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Adam写封信,欢迎他到中国旅游并提出在中国旅游的相关建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表示:extend→express
建议:recommend→suggest
有益的:helpful→beneficial
此外:in addition→what's more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Located in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River on the Jianghan Plain, it has a unique place in history and is known as the Cradle of Chu Culture as well as Land of Fish and Rice.
拓展句:Jingzhou, which is located in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River on the Jianghan Plain, has a unique place in history and is known as the Cradle of Chu Culture as well as Land of Fish and Rice.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly, I’d like to recommend that you pay a visit to Jingzhou in southern Hubei, which is also my hometown.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Secondly, I advise you to fully experience what Jingzhou has to offer, from sightseeing at popular tourist sites, such as the Ancient City Wall and Jingzhou Museum, to tasting traditional cuisines and going shopping at local markets.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)